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cdnflirt
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Help me choose...

Hey guys, I will be posting poems here in hopes of getting everybody`s HONEST opinion. I will post them as I finish each poem. I pray that each of you will give me honest feedback on if you think it would make a good 25th anniversary gift.

The purpose of these poems is to give as a gift for my aunt and uncle`s 25th wedding anniversary.


Posted on 2011-07-28 at 23:29:32.

cdnflirt
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Your Silver Anniversary

The two of you are an inspiration to the world.
You are the perfect example of soulmates,
Who can celebrate and console each other
Through the good times and the bad.
With a quarter of a century of memories,
Laughter, happiness and adventures.



All those years ago when love was found
A fire sparked to life in each of you
Today that fire burns even stronger.
Congratulations on your 25th year honeymoon!
For all these reasons and more,
We present to you
The Silver Award.


Posted on 2011-07-28 at 23:29:55.

syanide shadowalker
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hmmm

With out actually knowing you or your aunt and uncle, I would have to say that in my opinion the second one is a lot better. For starters it flows better when read. I also seems less cliche and more from your heart. I think that it would be a perfect gift for the occasion.


Posted on 2011-08-03 at 16:14:57.

Eol Fefalas
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Agreed...

...I like the second one better, too.

Also, welcome back Syanide... and thanks for drawing my attention to this post... must have missed it when Flirt originally tacked it up. +1


Posted on 2011-08-03 at 16:23:52.
Edited on 2011-08-03 at 16:25:02 by Eol Fefalas

Chessicfayth
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both are interesting

but i'll have to follow the crowd on this one. the second one gets the Cheshire Stamp of Approval


Posted on 2011-08-07 at 22:33:44.

   
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